Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars and riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Road accidents have always been a major reason for concern in many countries. It has been argued that an effective approach for developing safer roads, is by raising the legal age that is allowed for driving. From my standpoint, this is a beneficial way to tackle this issue and I share this view.
To begin with, teenagers usually lack enough responsibility to operate vehicles. During adolescent years, many are still reckless and ignorant. Therefore, a clear idea of what is wrong and what is right has not been shaped in their minds. This immaturity will thus encourage them to break laws and put lives in danger A young adult, for instance, will drive above the speed limit merely to impress his friends. If the legal age increases, juveniles will have enough time and experience to mature and develop a conscientious character.
Furthermore, driving under the influence of drugs and alcohol, which is done frequently by teenagers, is another factor that aggravates danger. In a great number of countries, unfortunately, drugs are easily accessible by juveniles. Since irresponsibility usually heightens during adolescence, many drive on drugs with no hesitation. This has fatal consequences for both the driver and the pedestrians. To illustrate, drunk teenagers are held responsible for the vast majority of car accidents in the United States annually. As minors grow up, they comprehend more about the risks of drugs. Therefore, they tend to become more cautious and realize the hazards of driving under the influence.
In conclusion, raising the minimum age will aid citizens of any country in having fewer accidents. Consequently, the well-being of residents is assured and they will all live happier and healthier lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26258992806 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94164779589 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643884892086 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4062228184 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.0588235294 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131499591415 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361885738989 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304763767738 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738663137813 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247980844348 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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