Some people think the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, think there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Decreasing the crinimal rate is currently one of the important issues in many cities and countires. Some individuals believe that extending the length of punishment in prisons can effectively prevent crime, whereas others argue that govement can apply better methods to make it happen. In my view, providing financial support and public lectures about local laws by the governments may reduce crime more efficiently.
On the one hand, longer punishment in prisons are considered as an effective methods to decrease the criminal rate in different reasons. First of all, this punishing method may mentally influence potential criminals because of the terrible results which they have to face to in the future; and it may emphasize people’s awareness, that no one wants to stay in prisons, espiciall for a significantly long-term period. Moreover, some people argue that blocking dangerous criminals such as serial killers in the prisons as long as possible may ensure the whole society to stay safe more easily, since the ‘most’ threating people are in their cells.
However, some people think that warning potential criminals by issuing longer sentences is not the most effective way to reduce crime. It may be even better if the government can provide some supportive assistances to the publics, such as offering public lectures about laws and policies, suppling financial support for the people in the low socio-economical status’ groups. The updated legal information can assist individuals to be more aware about legal and illegal situations, avoiding breaking different laws. Meanwhile, financial support for people who are living under the National Standards may decrease some people’s criminal motivations for such as stealing and robbery. Therefore, legal and financial supports have positive influences of reducing crimes.
In conclusion, despite of the concerning from longer prison sentences, providing legal and financial supports seems to be more supportive for the publics to be aware of the laws and keep away from breaking them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'method'?
Suggestion: method
... prisons are considered as an effective methods to decrease the criminal rate in differ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56151419558 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93308903289 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555205047319 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4668441701 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.916666667 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180887278846 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781282670284 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951173258417 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106547750173 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532983154539 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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