We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Since it seems impossible to provide sufficient assistance to everyone, some people believe that we should put more efforts on supporting domestic people rather than offering essential supplies to others globally. In my opinion, I believe that government should still try their best to assist everyone in the world despite of the extra more efforts they have to put by doing so.
Assisting domestic individuals and groups may be carried out more easily than international support, in terms of transporting methods and the costs on shipping. It can be way more convenient and cheaper than transporting a variety of items to somewhere in the county. For example, if some people need help in their own countries, those who are concerned can easily deliver daily essential foods and commodities such as grains and medicine to them by highly developed train lines and highways. Moreover, shipping objects on trains or vans will obviously cost less than by plane to different continents. Therefore, some people believe that government should care more about their own communities.
Although it is true that helping domestic people is more cost-effective and less-demanding, assisting international individuals who are living in poverty is deniable necessary. Supplies such as foods and medicine offered by international charity groups and government to the people in under-developing areas can protect them from being tortured by starvation and serious infectious illness, including malaria. Additionally, those supportive objects, like tents, blanket and foods, are also significantly important to assist refugees whose lives are ruined by destructive wars. Hence, supporting people who are suffering difficult situations globally is indeed necessary for government and charity groups.
In conclusion, although helping domestic people is easier to be achieved, government should not ignore the necessity of helping international people whose lives are treatened by illness, starvation and wars.
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- Space research is a waste of money The government should spend money on improving conditions of people living on the Earth To what extent do you agree or disagree 93
- Some people think the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, think there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6856187291 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05382122855 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571906354515 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2663634716 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.666666667 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122853145271 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460502230067 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422405419222 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849491658593 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340059305257 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.