Some people think that the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environmental issues become hot potatoes in today's advance era. Therefore, number of individuals believe that by increasing the price of fuels, the problem of global environment will overcome. But I strongly disagree with the statement because there are numerous other ways to overcome this problem and there ways are explained in the paragraphs below.
To begin with, resources become limited day by day, due to overuse of them. Therefore, by increasing the cost of such resources is not enough to solve environmental issues. Due to this fact, there are also plenty of another measures to overcome such issues. The first and foremost measure is usage of public transport rather than private vehicles. Because, if individuals use public transport on their regular basis then the number of vehicles on road become decreases. Because, if the number of transports decrease, then there is less amount of harmful gases in air which releases from these automobiles and leads to global warming. Therefore, lower number of transportation means minimise in the rate of global warming.
Furthermore, the another factor to solve this problem is systems which are passed by government of many cities or states. For instance, in Delhi, legal authorities organise odd-even system to overcome such problems. In this method, one day only even number cars are allowed to drive on road and on another day, cars of opposite number are allowed. Due to this, there is low traffic on roads which overcomes environmental issues in a little way. In addition, in contemporary settings, legal communities provide CNGs contain automobiles on the place of another's. Due to this fact, there is also decrease in the rate of harmful gases and usage of natural resources such as fuels which lead to environmental problems.
To recapitulate, according to my outlook, although increase in fuel cost may overcome environmental issues. However, in comparison to this, other measures are more effective such as odd-even system, usage of CNGs automobiles and public transportation so on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a little way" with adverb for "little"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ds which overcomes environmental issues in a little way. In addition, in contemporary settings,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27828746177 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88246050962 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516819571865 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0245213484 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.8888888889 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145346252844 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512847731843 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600327416765 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104387427075 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457641993476 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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