Some people think that books should be stopped in school and that videos, films and computers should be used instead. To what extend do you agree?
Book references are part of learnings, the intellectual knowledge of each mostly comes from these material. However, some people believe that this tool should be replaced by videos, films and computers. This essay disagrees with the statement for books are important weapons to teach lessons and broaden our skills intellectually.
Part of the development of a person’s mental ability in the early stage of life is to start reading books. Additionally, during the beginning of our primary school books are essential on our everyday lessons. As years passed by, technology everyday becomes more modernized and that the application and the uses of computers, videos, and films are included in teaching presentation especially at school. This help lecture becomes easy to understand and exciting to students. But, books are still vital for they are the source in exhibiting a more understandable lessons. Additionally, it should not be stopped because children will be affected in rural areas where technology is sluggish and electricity is scarce. Like for example, in a small town in the Philippines where poor children could not even afford to buy books and there is an inadequate electricity in the place, thus we cannot replace computers videos and films in their learnings. Furthermore, in a highly urbanized city for example stricken by lightning’s and books are not available anymore and schools will then be paralyzed.
In summary, books should not be cast-off considering the huge impact when stopped totally in our learnings. It is essential at school for children’s references in different subjects, and it will be their guide in the start of their journey as a student.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...lessons. As years passed by, technology everyday becomes more modernized and that the ap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, thus, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38289962825 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07514273039 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583643122677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4303118177 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.384615385 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282894615116 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948130907799 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904689726365 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19774186617 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0075001422058 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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