Some people think that cars should be banned from large cities
There has been controversy surrounding the banned car for a long time. A school of thought holds that the government should ban private vehicles downtown to protect the environment while others believe that it is not necessary. In my opinion, blanket bans on cars have a positive impact. I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages below.
On the one hand, many people claim that the prohibition of cars in large cities or city centres is extremely necessary. People's health is seriously affected by pollution from car exhaust. Moreover, air pollution leads to an increase in deathly diseases such as cancer. The second reason is that it increases the level of traffic congestion. Therefore, the result is that there are more and more road accidents and that some major buildings and artwork may be attacked. Furthermore, car noise pollution affects people's lives too.
On the other hand, some people consider that banned cars have negative impacts. Firstly, private vehicles are the main form of transportation. Almost all people choose to travel by car or motorbike. It is really convenient to work or go to school. In addition, children and seniors are not healthy enough to walk for long periods, so cars should be allowed.
In conclusion, although traveling by car has some benefits for children and old people, I completely agree that the government should ban cars downtown to protect the environment as well as the community's health.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, may, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80029959962 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600840336134 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2825022382 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.875 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422091736669 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110196572701 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881704834604 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228387237874 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469177645214 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, may, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80029959962 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600840336134 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2825022382 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.875 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422091736669 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110196572701 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881704834604 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228387237874 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469177645214 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.