some people think certain prisoners should be made to unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. to what extent do you agree?
Crimes in many countries have gone beyond the
alarming rate and it is a common practice to put
convicted people behind bars. A segment of society
opines that not all crimes are equal and repercussion
of harsh sentence for all offences is uncivilised. They
outline the need for unpaid community service as
punishments for mild-offenders and youngsters. I
believe that certain offenders should be given non-
custodial sentences.
The predominant reason for me to believe that unpaid
community services like cleaning streets, planting
trees, and working for charity instead of prison is that
many offenders are not born-criminals and the
circumstance often incite them to commit a felony
Besides, when such unpremeditated convicts are
expelled from the society. they incline to re-offend in
isolation as there is none to accept them. Apart from
this, juvenile delinquents should be rehabilitated by
indulging them in community services.
On the contrary, brutal offenders who commit heinous
crimes like premeditated murder, vandalism.
abduction. hijacking. rapes and so on should be
punished to set examples in the society. Thus, the
background of a criminal and the motif of a crime
should be considered. For instance, if a teenager
steals food from a store as his mother is starving is a
completely different scenario than someone robbing
an old lady. The former deserves a second chance
while the latter should be imprisoned.
To recapitulate, someone with no previous record of
crime and a sensible reason for a slight misconduct
should be treated differently than a serial killer. The
objective of the law is to maintain peace in the society.
not to punish people. Thus unpaid community services
is a great option to let some convicted lament for their crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, second, so, thus, while, apart from, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60777385159 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97210326955 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60777385159 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.5549220972 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 35.0 4.38176352705 799% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223533353708 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704600811533 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592551445629 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480376885251 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649195507468 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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