Some people think children have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The debate on whether children should be allowed to make mistakes or not has been ongoing. While some people argue that children have the freedom to make mistakes, others believe that adults should intervene and prevent them from making mistakes. In my opinion, making mistakes is a critical part of children's development, but adult supervision is necessary to prevent potential harm.
On the one hand, those who advocate for children's freedom to make mistakes argue that mistakes are a natural part of the learning process. Allowing children to experiment and take risks, even if it means failing at times, helps them learn from experiences and develop essential soft skills such as problem-solving and critical thinking. Additionally, it builds resilience and self-confidence, which are vital characteristics in life and future careers. Moreover, preventing children from making mistakes may hinder their independence and autonomy, as they become too reliant on adults.
On the other hand, some people argue that adults should intervene and prevent children from making mistakes. Children are vulnerable and may not anticipate the severity of consequences of their actions, which could lead to significant harm to themselves and others. Adults must ensure children's safety and protection from potential dangers. Preventing mistakes can also reduce the likelihood of physical injuries and emotional damage, which may negatively affect children's growth and development.
In conclusion, it is vital for children to make mistakes as it is integral to their development. However, adults should supervise and guide them to avoid potential harm and ensure their safety.
- Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use Is it a positive or negative development 82
- Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults by authorities To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use Is it a positive or negative development 67
- In some countries more and more adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use Is it a positive or negative development 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62450592885 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92734114659 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553359683794 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0031377386 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.461538462 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.49471717058 0.244688304435 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192833357105 0.084324248473 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142112659031 0.0667982634062 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325214916141 0.151304729494 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150809221374 0.056905535591 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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