Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views give opinions ?
People hold different views about at what age children should start their official education. While some claimed that it would be better to allow kids to attend elementary schools when they are at least 7 years old, I would argue that children could have formal education earlier.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why it is believed that 7 should be the minimum age to begin learning officially. Firstly, since many parents do not want their children to be put under pressure of study at a very early stage of life. And this will enable their children to enjoy an innocent and carefree childhood. Indeed, in some Asian countries like VietNam, a major part of elementary school pupils have been experiencing intensive studying programs that do not allow them to have to time to play and this probably cause some negative impacts on their psychology and physical health. The second reason is that when turning 7 years old, kids have significant mental and physical development, which enable them to manage their study at school well. As a result, they are more likely to achieve the best school performance.
On the other hand, I believe the appropriate time for kids to go to school is when they turn 6 years old. The fact is that for years, children have started their formal education at this age and gained success without many difficulties. Scientific evidences have also proved that at this stage, kids have enough brain development to do basic calculation and certain educational activities. Therefore, if parents do not send 6 year - old kids to school, it may be a waste of time and investment for their kids’ future. Moreover, in any society, children will become the main workforce for the country development later on. If they begin their education path lately, there may be a shortage of skillful labor – force for the whole nation. This may lead to a degrade in the economic growth prospect in that country as well.
In conclusion, people have opposite ideas about when children should go to school officially. In my view, 6 years old is the perfect time for them to go to elementary school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 760, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... for the whole nation. This may lead to a degrade in the economic growth prospect in that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, at least, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89285714286 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56691129371 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527472527473 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7445625448 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.764705882 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307137195003 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102694102518 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682952581459 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211444776288 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805094755204 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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