Some people think that companies and private individuals should pay to clear up the pollution they produced, the government should not pay for it. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In many country the mid point weight of people is increasing and their limits of fitness and health are decreasing. this essay will diccuses both problems and solutions in ensuing paragraph.
To begin with, there are problems of overweight is increasing nowadays.The main problem is people unaware their health and fitness so people eat unhealthy foods and drinks so that people weight is increasing sharply. because of that many time many problems come in their body so this effected their fitness and health like Heart problems, back pain and other problems. for example, according to times of india survey 14.40 of people not aware his health in the entire world so that people weight is increasing.
furthermore, there are many ways to solve the problem of weight increment, health and fitness. first of all, in modern era, Most of people jobs are working on the computer so people effect on body weight, fitness and health but if people start the exercise so this problem can be sloved. in addition, people start the exercise so that there are many benifits for the body main problem can be solved such as people weight will not growing and fitness and healthy. people don’t have to go out for exercise and they start exercise at home because of that working people save their precious time. for instance, according to one servey in the Uk 77 percentage of people daily exercise as result only 21.90 persentage of people unfit and unhelthy in the uk.
In conclusion, Nowadays, many people are not aware his health and fitness so that they are eating unhealthy food so his weight is increasing. however, if people start the exercise so that his fitness and health will well and his weight can be decreased
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89419795222 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39082822323 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440273037543 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0373752533 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0808658847668 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412524658394 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291669828915 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0531013090581 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269282197201 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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