Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, many people think that competition in work or study is good, many others think that cooperation is better. For myself, I think that both are good for their intended purposes.
On the one hand, competition will create excellent individuals, because when there is competition, people will have the motivation to try and become the best version of themselves, excellent individuals will be the motivation for those behind to try harder. For example, in school competitions, good students will always try to get higher scores than everyone else, achievement races will make them not rest on their laurels. Or like in companies, good people will try to bring the highest revenue to the company and that means they are paid according to their values, the rest will try not to fall behind.
On the other hand, cooperation will make things easier. For example, when there is cooperation, the weaknesses of members will be compensated by others, and when facing difficulties, instead of having to solve them by ourselves, there will always be people to help us. This makes everyone less pressured. For example, when doing a project for school , if working in a group, the work will be divided equally according to each person's strengths, this will help reduce the workload and save time for areas where we are not strong.
In short, competition and cooperation are both double-edged swords. As for me, I think that choosing competition or cooperation depends on each case. Sometimes competition is needed, sometimes cooperation is needed, depending on the purpose of use to reach each person's goal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...that cooperation is better. For myself, I think that both are good for their inte...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...example, when doing a project for school , if working in a group, the work will be...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...re both double-edged swords. As for me, I think that choosing competition or coop...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ing on the purpose of use to reach each persons goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as for, for example, i think, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1216730038 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7882055762 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524714828897 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0216614061 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184965181948 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087436286511 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590230494182 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133411599822 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536033051169 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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