The damage to the environment is increasing at an alarming rate mainly due to human activities. Even though, a grate deal of efforts are being now made by governments all over the world, individuals also have a major role to play in the minimizing global environmental hazards. I strongly believe that the environment is not major concern for most people.
To begin with, despite government efforts to reduce environmental problems, many people are reluctant to take action to solve environmental problems. One of the major reasons for the pollution of the environment is the uncontrolled use of automobiles. If individuals can make a conscious effort to change their lifestyle, by cutting down the use of private cars and use public transport, it would substantially reduce the burning of fossil fuels. In other words, serious attempt could be made by individuals to travel to work by buses and trains, which are cheap and abundant.
In addition to this, dropping lots of plastics into the environment is done by people. If every individual of people considers himself responsible for protecting the environment could play a significant role to make our environment safe. For example, using enormous amount of plastic which is a dangerous pollutant of soil in daily life cause one of the biggest environmental issues. In other words, almost every consumer use plastic while shopping, and throw it after using. Instead of plastic, people can choose other ways that are more Eco-friendly. For example, they can use paper and cloth bags as an alternative in supermarkets. Furthermore, many people may not try to protect the environment for reasons such as lack of awareness and also, because of their interests.
To conclude, therefore, it seems that environmental problems are a worrying concern and individuals have a crucial role to cooperate with government to reduce environmental problems. Lack of individual participation could mean that, addressing environmental issues is beyond reach.
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 67
- Some think the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
- The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose and can be damaging. Do you agree or disagree? 61
- Some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea while others disagree strongly Consider both sides of this debate and present your own opinion 91
- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: ALL_OVER_THE_WORD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'all over the world' (=globally)?
Suggestion: all over the world
...forts are being now made by governments all over the word, individuals also have a major role to ...
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Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...he environment is not major concern for most of people. To begin with, despite government e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30188679245 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11610309408 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7749919407 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.375 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156197220353 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495159505432 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461092331361 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101913727512 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327027027414 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.