Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
With the increasing impact of global warming, discussions about environment began to come up more frequently. A part of people assume that developed countries should be more interested with nature and Earth. Others interpret this problem as a global issue and think that it concerns everyone. The most rationalist way is to establish a joint commission on the subject and provide a basis for comprehensive work.
First of all, it is well-known fact that economically advanced nations suffered enormous damage to nature. After industrial revolution, boosting emission of carbon-derived gases into habitats and some negative consequences of technological advances triggered the pollution of world. Moreover, in some countries, such as united Kingdom, with the effect of contamination, poisonous gas clouds were formed. Additionally, taken into consideration the military exercises carried out by countries like united States in arctic and deserts, it seems explicitly reasonable that a lot of ecologists blame these kind of governments and see them as responsible.
Despite the above arguments, it is indubitable that climate change is a universal, global problem. Therefore it is pointless to demand for assistance from a single segment and necessary to produce solutions on global scale. Furthermore, developing countries are more likely to suffer as a result of climate change, so they should be just as motivated as developed countries to help environment.
To conclude, decisions of a common commission on climate change and global warming should be acted upon. In my mind, this committee should be headed by representatives of developed counties and majority of economical expenses should compensate by them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, so, therefore, well, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66923076923 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2174174656 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642307692308 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3694653923 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.384615385 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215157139593 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659976965995 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065249771375 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121127882894 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399516187297 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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