Some people think that the development of technology has made our life more complex, and the solution is to live a simpler life without that technology. Do you agree or disagree
It is believed that the revolutionary of technology leads people to a complexity life so that it is encouraged to be eliminated. I partly agree with this argument for the following reasons.
On the one hand, technology would be beneficial for housewives in terms of household chores. In other words, it helps them ease the burden of housework by inventing advanced household appliances. Some decades ago, for example, people found it more challenging to complete a cooking process of peeling, dicing, mixing and reheating the food. However, it has been much more convenient in recent years by virtue of microwave oven. Secondly, it is irrefutable that technology makes people easier in commuting. In the hustle and bustle pace of life, thanks to cars or some public transportation such as buses, subways, people have time-effectiveness to travel to work or to their destination compared to over 60 years ago.
On the other hand, modern technology also has negative impacts on each individual. Firstly, because of the severe competition in job market, people are likely to work more after office hours. With the mobility and portability of mobile phone, people are able to conduct their business even after leaving offices to earn more money. This leads them to insufficient time for their families and other recreational activities causing stress in their lives. According to NIOSH (The National Institute for Occupational Safety and Health (NIOSH), 80% of workers feel stress on the job. Secondly, with the advent of technology, some factories or companies utilize automatic assembly line to boost productivity. It has a negative influence on finding job. For instance, in a Thailand hospital, robots are likely to responsible for delivering medical materials to replace employees.
In conclusion, while I agree that technology makes people more uncomfortable in their lives, I also believe that it plays an indispensable role for them for aforementioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'completing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: completing
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to earn more money. This leads them to insufficient time for their families and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34405144695 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05111318603 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588424437299 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2912407732 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7647058824 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171410452399 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524174827322 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497274914734 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120176392872 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405898957115 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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