Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve others however, believe that the problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take action? Discusse both views and give your opinion.
In general, there are different views on how to handle variety of environmental problems. While some believe that this matter is too challenging for individuals to manage, many others, including myself, state it is a responsibility not only of governments, but also citizens.
On the one hand, there are various reasons to argue why some think individual’s role is not beneficial to protect the environment. The first reason lies in the person’s restricted power to control the reasons of this detriment. Managing some issues such as global warming or Ozone layer depletion is beyond people’s ability. In this circumstance, the importance of related organizations becomes bold and the solutions should be meditated by government. Secondly, toxic gasses which are released by factories are other increasing matter. I meant that to reduce this matter, some rules about limited work hours should be taken by government. As an example, in some developing countries, factories work more than 15 hours each day to produce more products. They do not care whether the air is polluted or not and they just focus on their profit. If related organizations provide a obligatory program which contains 8 hours of work for them, it would be a huge step to reduce air pollution and preserve environment.
In spite of these arguments, in my opinion there are several actions which should be taken by individuals in environmental protection process. Mainly, persons should act like a community to decrease stated matters. In other word, warning each other about the disadvantages of environmental harmful activities should be considered as a moral responsibility for every person. To illustrate, think about one of your friends who prefers throwing rubbish in the street rather than bin. If you make him/ her aware of the hazardous consequences of this disagreeable action, your friend would stop doing this and the waste chemical would be reduced. As a next action, citizens can also prevent deforestation. Deforestation means clearing trees and plants without replanting. By these words, to stop this harmful event, every person can plant a tree. For instance, families might consider one day in every year as a family planting day. In that day, all family members have to plant a tree or a flower in yard, garden or corner of the street.
All things considered, although it seen sensible for some people to believe that managing environmental problems is too tricky for humans, I think that people can do several things to overcome these matters.
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- TPO 23 86
- For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school 86
- Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom 83
- Young people enjoy life more than older people do. 56
- Young people nowadays dont give enough time to helping their communities. 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 891, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rofit. If related organizations provide a obligatory program which contains 8 hou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i mean, i think, in general, such as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21167883212 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01731220734 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571776155718 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.748512109 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3636363636 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6818181818 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243460388178 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587544204833 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601947057625 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159588280612 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457490086759 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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