Some people think that good healthy is essential to every person, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the disadvantage of private healthcare outweight the advantage.
It is true that an increasing number of people are concerned about their health condition and they are willing to spend a lot of money for pharmaceutical industry and hospitals. However, whether who can operate healthcare service is a debatable issue. My view is that private medical system plays a vital role in participating network instead of bringing the drawbacks.
On the one hand, non-governmental health organizations have shrunk pressure for state. This means that overcrowed circumstance in local hospitals has required appearance of private clinic seriously. So, patents nowadays have more choices to go to check-up their health according to financial pocket and individual demand. Moreover, some out-of-state medical clinics provide the latest health infrastructure for upper class in society. For example, the cost for curing at Vinmec international hospital is higher many times compared to public hospital, however, reversely, patients will be received the modernist service and caring.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages when considering to go to the private hospital to heal patients. Firstly, medical charges at this usually cost an arm and a leg to some elite in the society. Because it does not seem like the public healthcare system is subsidised by state, clinics are operated by personal or enterprises, therefore, to compensating that kind of cost, they have to raise the charges. As a result, just well-economic households can afford to private hospital. Secondly, medical centers do not have many special departments which have been permitted like public states. Hence, patients with their unusual syndromes often deliver to state rather than private.
In conclusion, medical service is run by profit-making companies appear to take care healthy to everybody. Nevertheless, the advantages of private clinics outweight the disadvantages they bring.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considering going', 'considering gonna'.
Suggestion: considering going; considering gonna
...hand, there are some disadvantages when considering to go to the private hospital to heal patient...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57291666667 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08074959 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635416666667 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9784609978 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224019816116 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679749157244 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675110469475 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156233955698 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112197851828 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.