Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports, but others think that people should have the freedom to do whatever sport activities they choose, Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sports play a vital role in the development of a human, both physically and mentally. Certain individuals have the opinion that life-risking games should be restricted by policymakers, while some folks believe that there should be liberty to participate in any kind of game. This essay will discuss various arguments on this issue.
To begin with, some games such as paragliding, racing, bullfight, etc are extremely risky to human life, however, these activities are full of fun and thrill. Some folks argue that such games should be regulated by legislation, to ensure the safety of citizens. For instance, when people participate in racing competitions, they are full of excitement and usually are not conscious regarding safety. And this often leads to severe fatalities. Another form of sport that may result in similar unfortunate consequences is paragliding. Paragliding is a task which is highly dependent on weather conditions and equipment, if there is poor weather it can lead to accidents.
Despite these arguments certain individuals believe that there should be liberty in participating in different sports, to experience adventures. Youngsters particularly are very fond of these activities as they find it an easy way to calm there adrenaline rush, which in turn keeps their minds free of any crooked thoughts. In addition to this may give a sense of accomplishment.
To sum up, considering all these arguments I strongly agree that imposing restrictions on a certain sport may devalue its importance, and furthermore lead to extinction. Participating in extreme sports creates a feeling of being in ‘flow’
- Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports but others think that people should have the freedom to do whatever sport activities they choose Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports but others think that people should have the freedom to do whatever sport activities they choose Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14850534977 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8298429597 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2857142857 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176518462643 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534237357294 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341208402341 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103040776298 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383149585091 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.