University education is very much needed in this modern era to compete in the Global Village. some people are of the open that that learners should choose their higher studies subjects themselves, other opine that government should choose the discipline. It has become a matter of hostile debate so let us delve deeper and explain both the statements before I pen down my point of view.
Well, ideas and Outlook of people in a society always differs some people reckon that if student should opt their subject themselves according to their interest they will acheive good result in examination. Secondly, students who drop out within the studies, the rate of that students will decrease in future. For instance, in 2017, United kingdoms college dropout rate was 70% because government has gone against their choice of subjects. Thirdly, students who choose subject themselves will be able to take important decisions in their life, also self choice of subjects bring sense of responsibility and they pursue better for their bright future.
As every coin has two sides so lets flip the coin and try to understand the viewpoint of people carrying opposite view. First and foremost,if the government select subject for students, it is very beneficial for student because government choose subject for scholarship according to job sector and government knows very well about which sector has maximum job vacancies. What is more, this will decrease unemployment and if the unemployment is less, then countries go toward development. Last but not least, student who are not very mature while choosing their subject and whose parents are illiterate and cannot suggest their children while selecting subjects, in this government will help student in a good way.
Finally after considering both the justification I would like to open that, if government should choose the subject for student it is very beneficial for student while finding better jobs and also for their future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, while, for instance, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2358490566 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61108754609 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553459119497 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4618247448 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.75 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352998820547 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126006696549 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974175837257 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23481269189 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439850587366 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.