Some people think that the government should pay one of the parents of very youngs children to stay at home to look after their very young children. List the advantages and the disadvantages of this
Nowadays, at an early stage of a child's childhood, their parents tend to not be around that often as supposed. This causes the child to feel isolated, thinking that their parents do not care about him or her. Therefore, to ease the pain of feeling alone and abandoned, they approach bad ways such as drugs and violence. Some people think that the government should pay one of the parent of very young children to stay at home to look after their children. Below are the advantages and disadvantages of this policy.
To start it out, this policy lets one of the parents to be around their child, giving their child love and attention, making their child feel safe, secure and loved. Secondly, this policy lets one of the parents have time to educate their child as early childhood education is extremely important for a developing child.
On the downside, providing such policy will cause the family to suffer after the policy ends as the parent chosen to take care of their child will have a hard time finding a job due to inexperience, in the end the family has to suffer due to financial problems. Furthermore, the parent chosen will become dependent towards the government and is already used to the idea of the government funding them. When the policy ends, the parent will not be wiling to find a job and a family will be broken due to arguments about financial problems between the two parents .
To sum it all up, i think that such policies do bring great advantages despite the few disadvantages stated above. Overall i think if the parents are determined to raise their child well, nothing could stop them.
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flaws:
No. of Words: 284 350
No. of Different Words: 145 200
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 284 350
No. of Characters: 1301 1500
No. of Different Words: 145 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.105 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.581 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.37 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 83 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.437 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.366 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.611 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.141 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
...nancial problems between the two parents . To sum it all up, i think that such ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... the two parents . To sum it all up, i think that such policies do bring great...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71830985915 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46803136614 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531690140845 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5686084032 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329656987232 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142082446584 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.215149146191 0.0667982634062 322% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202980323387 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180598959147 0.056905535591 317% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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