Some people think that the government should provide unemployed people with a free mobile phone and free access to the internet to help find jobs.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
A certain people claim that government should support unemployed people with mobile phone along with internet access free of charge for increasing job-finding opportunity. This essay partly agree on government should give both mobile phone and internet for free.
By giving away both mobile phone and internet service to the unemployed people should be able to create more opportunities. Unemployed ones can extend their job search range such as use internet to browse or apply for job application on website. Moreover, with the access to internet, unemployed people have more opportunities to sharpen their skills, which can increase their chances on acquiring the jobs. In additional, it is the responsible to the government to take care of their people. Proving the unemployed with mobile and internet is one of way to do so.
However, this does not mean that government should give every unemployed people free mobile phone and internet without any condition or screening. There might be a certain group of people, who intended to be unemployed, in order to get these free services. Furthermore, both mobile and internet services are not for free, in the end the government is the one who purchase both mobile and internet package. As a result, the government have a chance to overspending money on these matters.
In conclusion, although unemployed people should have a basic access to both mobile phone and internet for free, but this should be for short period of time without causing major burden to the government budget. Also, there should be a certain limitation and screening beforehand in order to reducing any chance of exploits.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 55, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'basic access'.
Suggestion: basic access
... although unemployed people should have a basic access to both mobile phone and internet for f...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... for free, but this should be for short period of time without causing major burden to the gov...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17602996255 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76095256508 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486891385768 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2039123757 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.307692308 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439033889024 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176694608802 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131163112435 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316770934859 0.151304729494 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118855426294 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 55, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'basic access'.
Suggestion: basic access
... although unemployed people should have a basic access to both mobile phone and internet for f...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... for free, but this should be for short period of time without causing major burden to the gov...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17602996255 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76095256508 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486891385768 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2039123757 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.307692308 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439033889024 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176694608802 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131163112435 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316770934859 0.151304729494 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118855426294 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.