Some people think that government should provide unemployed people with a free mobile phones and free access to the internet to help them find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?
One of the most controversial issue today relates to unemployment. Many people thinks when government should provide unemployed people with a free mobile phone and internet to help them find jobs. I am totally disagreed this statement.
Nowadays, mostly people are unemployed in our country, and this is not good for us. Apart from this, some people think when government should provide free mobile phones and internet for unemployed people then it is very easy to find jobs. I think, it is wrong because how we are 100% sure if government should provide that things for unemployed people then they will use only find their jobs. In these days, mostly unemployed people take drugs in our country and spoil their future so, when they will misuse these things in their life it is very dangerous for us.
As far as, government are responsible for unemployed. Because they are never provided jobs so, thats why some people take drugs because these type of people have always negative thinking then they feel depressed thats why they are taking drugs. Furthermore, if government should provide free mobile phone and internet for these type of people then they will advertising for drugs. So, thats why I think it is very dangerous for all human beings.
Overall, Government should provide jobs for all people when they do jobs then they never take drugs or never do bad things in their life because they are very busy in their jobs. They never have been time for think about these disgusting things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, then, apart from, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89803921569 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34172490046 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454901960784 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4110940529 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0769230769 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345734859533 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151801258468 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169761141589 0.0667982634062 254% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261541722471 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12475008357 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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