some people think that government should spend money on faster means of transport.other think that government should spend money on other things like city and environment m.Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
Few people consider that authorities ought to spend cash on swift transport system whereas other say that government would invest money on another things such as urban regions nor environment.I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
To begin with, there are manifold reasons government must need spending payment on public transport but also in these days anyone have a private vehicles.For example, car,bicycle, motor cycle and so on.Hence, Everyone want consuming their own vehicle.So,it is very affect on the global warming.Therefore, there have plenty pollution like air,land,noise and water pollution and extra.otherwise,it is very dangerous for human being life.
On the flip side,environment plays a vital role of life neither everyone have duty to keep the environment safe as well as they can good impact of life.Furthermore,in couple of years city areas has a lot of pollution available nor adolescent have almost using their own transport.Eventually,it is very bad influence senior person,kids,teenagers on body as far as there are causing plethora diseases.For instance,heart,blood pressure,low pressure,anxiety and extra.Consequesnnty
government can spend money on transport vehicle and give good facilities.I think so,everyone might consume the public vehicles.It is very good impact on society.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand government would invest money on private transport system.Thus,
pollution might be reduce day by day.on other hand,environment have equal obligation people can doing clean the cities than they would superb affect for health or they can feel health and wealth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, another thing, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82644628099 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.80222776825 2.80592935109 136% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665289256198 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.612253768 49.4020404114 309% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 352.5 106.682146367 330% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.5 20.7667163134 291% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 41.5 7.06120827912 588% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223497680539 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137482144632 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526672930039 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122575071536 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687457288074 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.3 13.0946893788 277% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.12 50.2224549098 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.42 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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