some people think that the government is wasting money on art and that money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this ?
Art is the symbol of notion for a nation, where its images of contemporary society is represented. It is utmost important to the particular society having long historical background and victory especially for the future offspring. Some society and their belief, identity and beliefs are represented through arts- in this sense art is crucial for them to explore. Other sector, however, if other sector such as academic sector should not be ignore. To me, if I had to choose between investing the budget either in art or other sector, I would definitely go for win-win situation for both. Thus, I partially agree to the statement given by the author in question.
No one could ignore the role of arts in exploration of certain culture, beliefs, society and nation as a whole. It's because art is the medium, which carry the message from ancient time to the new generation. Historical background of particular society with the images printed on stone or the audio recording or may be picture drawing on the wall helped us to trace and made conclusion about how our ancestor used to survive at that time. For instance, Gautam Buddha- the light of Asia- was born in a royal family and then he gives up all the luxurious life to be a monk was identified through the art, text printed on stone of that era.
Then, what about the other sector? After all-knowing these thing, of course anyone would be willing to invest in the art sector but back in their mind they are actually conscious about consequence of complete ignorance of other sector such as academic sectors: Education, science and other sector. They are the backbone of the nation and assisting to keep progressing even in the art sector as well. To illustrate this, take an example of archaeological survey of ancient art, there will be the instant need of an archaeologist, chemist, physicist and even the radiologists from academic sector to know about the age and more information by carbon dating of that art. Thus, they are inseparable.
Thus, to sum up, Government should invest in proportionate rate in each sector according the need of particular sector and capacity of the nation. Both art and other sector are equally important for exploration, economic achievement and prosperity of nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...beliefs, society and nation as a whole. Its because art is the medium, which carry ...
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Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'these things'?
Suggestion: this thing; these things
...out the other sector? After all-knowing these thing, of course anyone would be willing to i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, may, similarly, so, then, thus, well, after all, at least, for instance, of course, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 41.998997996 198% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2554.0 1615.20841683 158% => OK
No of words: 515.0 315.596192385 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95922330097 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70568178088 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 176.041082164 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522330097087 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 813.6 506.74238477 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0066740793 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.043478261 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3913043478 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65217391304 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124255228158 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404589156697 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270300221301 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710538912297 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170560294167 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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