In contemporary life, opinions are divided as to whether the government ought to spend money on arts or they should distribute their money among other sectors. While I agree that works of art are luxury goods, but it is not to say that artistic products are idle.
Advocates for arts have their reason that artistic works are perfect tools to express human ideas and emotions. It is usually easier for children, especially who experience mental retardation, to draw a picture to show their complex thoughts or feelings than write words. Arts also help to covey cultural features from ancient civilization to modern world through many antique drawings, sculptures, and woodcarvings. Moreover, art industry brings tremendous financial benefits to the countries which have invested in it. Annually, huge revenue was gained from famous art galleries and museum over the world such as Smithsonian Institution in Washington, D.C and Le Louvre in Paris. Along with this attraction and development, other industries, especially tourism, are boosted and then the whole economy grows as a result.
On the other hand, allocating government funds on arts arbitrarily leads to other vital demands could not be supplied. , means that the more spending on artistic products, the less money attributed to human necessaries since the governmental budget is limited. Millions of people are starving every single moment over the world, mostly in third-world countries; Therefore these fundamental needs should be contributed to before recreational activities. In addition, spending on arts is considered extravagance and only a few people or elites can afford. Thus, it might be not truly equal for society because the underprivileged cannot enjoy or gain advantages arts. For instance, many well-known museums and galleries particularly serve the rich while the money used to build them was taken from everybody in society.
In conclusion, arts and their works are meaningful, but governments and authorities should reasonably balance the funds spending on them and other sections.
- Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 78
- Some people think that the government wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view? 89
- Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school while other children receive too much pressure from their over enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child Why do you think some 87
- Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more pe 87
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, third, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49375 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91425986984 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4395326904 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.2 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178514839642 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540014646042 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375365887496 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106831101969 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459625802541 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.