Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is still a major topic of concern in today's world when it comes to hazardous sports. While it is believed that these activities should be prohibited by governments, there is a more persuasive argument that people have the right to participate in kind of sports they are into.
It is a common belief that imposing a ban on extreme sports is necessary stems from two main rationales. The potential risks of dangerous sports are more significant, inferring to cause several health problems for players in the first place. To be specific, such activities are normally accompanied by a high rate of severe injuries and even fatality in some cases. Diving, for instance, is a very adventurous sport which has lots of dangers. People can be poisoned by oxygen, or can even lose consciousness if they meet poisonous sea creatures. Another reason mentioning is the mostly negative impacts on people's awareness, especially the young's since some dangerous sports are relatively violent.
However, there are more reasonable grounds that it is available for people to engage in any sports. It is true that each kind of sport deserves to be respected and dangerous sports are not an exception. In fact, these activities play an vital role in creating incredible events. If there are no hazardous sports, humans probably not conquer Everest - the highest peak in the world. In addition, many people go in for extreme sports which can satisfy their need for adventure. All of them may experience something more than normal activities can offer. Taking skydiving as an example, they may feel freedom like a bird when trying out such an exciting and adventurous sport.
In summary, while the government should prohibit people from doing extreme sports, there is stronger evidence that it is free for them to be able to take part in any sports. It is recommended that giving extreme sports a go will give people an opportunity to make their life more various.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ception. In fact, these activities play an vital role in creating incredible event...
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Line 3, column 617, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ample, they may feel freedom like a bird when trying out such an exciting and adv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, in fact, in summary, kind of, in some cases, it is true, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97852760736 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72770875067 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570552147239 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5161657958 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4705882353 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284395868757 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846688767348 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606606712651 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183106298628 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028499349154 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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