Some people think that the governments should give financial support to artists, musicians and poets. Others think that it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although some individuals advocate the idea that government are encouraged to invest in development of art, it is believed that it wastes a huge amount of money. Both perspectives will be analyzed in this essay.
There is little doubt that giving financial support to artists, musicians and poets requires an excessive amount of money. In fact, creating a masterpiece such as film, music, photography is prohibitively expensive while there are a multitude of other crucial sectors like economy, education, healthcare system which need financial aid. Therefore, investing in art is likely to become a heavy burden on national budget. Government, as a result, would impose more taxes to businesses and residents.
Nevertheless, it is advisable that governments fund for art due to some merits. Primarily, by investing in art, government coul recognize the contribution of artists, musicians and poets. Indeed, they contribute to conserve an enrich cultural identity of a country. It means masterpieces reflect the history and the lifestyle as well as the traditional customs which embrace mentel and cultural value of nation. Secondly, spending money promoting art contribute to develop entertainment of citizens. According to a research, in French, a majority of population consider discovery of masterpieces as an effective way of entertainment.
In conclusion, it is indispensable that government invests in development of art.
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- Some people think that the governments should give financial support to artists, musicians and poets. Others think that it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ts. Indeed, they contribute to conserve an enrich cultural identity of a country. It mean...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61290322581 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27618333154 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640552995392 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0641464569 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6923076923 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177890692892 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575671764254 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710629729072 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975975839087 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370339110826 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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