Some advocates claim that the students should suspend schooling for broadening themselves before they start the college.
First of all, there are abundance advantages of having a gap year before the university. In general, people are confused about what major to choose in college, which could be irrelevant to their future career, and lock of the abilities of team works and communicating skills after graduating from high school. Therefore spending years to work or travel not only increase the opportunities to find out what people exactly desire for, but also broaden their horizons. For example, in high school, most of the students experience the same situation and daily routine. On the contrary, the university students are comprised by various people with different backgrounds, growing the chances to obtain diversity aspects of view though the discussion in classes.
On the other hand, it is unusual in our conservative society because of peers pressure and family expectations. In other words, if a person wants to postpone his permission from school, have to deal with the spiritual stress from their parents and friends. What is worse, the financial supported might force them to give up and stay with their family. In addition, the job opportunities will possibly not match up with the expectation, while the person only graduated from high school.
In my point of view, I believe that spending a gap year to take adventures is one of the methods to be mature and independent of the attitude in life, whereas the pressure from either families or peers are also a considerable concern, having to handle seriously.
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- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 78
- Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ills after graduating from high school. Therefore spending years to work or travel not on...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le concern, having to handle seriously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in general, first of all, in other words, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18867924528 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7753017405 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62641509434 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4174268156 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0909090909 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171946760351 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631184451187 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475679006679 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094443724971 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763038988674 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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