Some people think that hobbies should be linked with technology.while other
Believe that it is not necessary for hobbies to be involved with technology. discuss what is your reason. Give reason for your answer and include examples from your experience.
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irreuocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the topic asserts that hobbies is necessary to be involved in technology or not? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who reckon that hobbies has been associated with technology. They strengthen their view point by claiming that large number of people hobby is cooking, reading books. A good illustration of this is cooking is highly benefical in the contemporary era, a massive number of people do job in hotel management such as restaurant and cafe. so used to lot of technology to make a junk food. For example; microwave, mixer and so on. It help to save a lot of time because, people are busy in the hectic schedule. Technology help us to encourage economy and motivation of people.
In addition to, reading books and novel is best hobby to spent leisure time but, in the modern scenerio books and novels is converted into e-book. This is the best way to read books used to mobile phone anywhere and acquire lot of information. Most people like read a book so, that way is promote the internet service in era. It is grown up business and economy of the nation. The best epitome of this is foreigner workers busy in time schedule. That is enjoy own hobby to use internet service and gain a lot of knowledge around us.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who believe that technology is not essential to be involved in hobbies. Art and craft is best hobby to show the creativity. It is based on human thinking. The best epitome of this is physically handicapped person are more interest in art but, that people is create a meaningful scenery in the world to use a memory and creativity. They are represent the imagination of mind without use of the technology.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options I believe that there is no single conclusion still, I take this ground that an effective clap require both use of hands. Technology is help to people joy hobby and save of time and it is grown up economy of nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66829268293 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70688196899 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50243902439 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7173912141 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.56 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149658289862 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432107783248 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564486971941 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851817740899 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419267705738 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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