Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Opinions diverge on whether organizing international sport event is bad instead it is adventitious. Although this sentiment can be justified to some certain extent, I am in opposition owing to some rational reason.
Admittedly, economic development is quite necessary in attract customers. This can be explained by the fact that sport event attracts customers to accommodate the profile to the city, and it greatly complements the strengthen countries bonds, which turn many people create their own jobs.
Notwithstanding the above, the most indispensable thing for hosting an international sports event is cost. The reason is that underdeveloped countries do not have enough financial recourses to build stadiums. Take local suppliers as an exemplary model for the necessity of organizing and hiring employees. Meanwhile about social disturbance, implement higher levels of security lead to restrict the freedom of movement of local citizens.
Last but not least, organizing international sport event attracts customers to accommodate the profile of the city. Hence, it will be take a heavy toll to construction investment fund and it is not used after that.
- Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet and they can study just as well at home To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon from egg to adult fish
- Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country while some people think it is bad Discuss both views and state your opinion 56
- The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon from egg to adult fish
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 211, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...to the city, and it greatly complements the strengthen countries bonds, which turn many people...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...ity of organizing and hiring employees. Meanwhile about social disturbance, implement hig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 177.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58192090395 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19251534595 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672316384181 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0611979834 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22739993693 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781812751919 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697886961725 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121567505587 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507574065575 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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