Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Opinions diverge on whether schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet. Although some fervently advocate this sentiment, I am in opposition owing to some rational reasons.
Admittedly, I find that most of the information on social platforms found by the students is rarely correct. Although online learning provides a wide range of resources and courses for students to choose which subjects are based on their interests, it is not true to reality and may contain some offensive content and photos on Facebook or Youtube. Therefore, students need the mastery and teaching of teachers to be able to solve these problems.
Further and even more prominently, schooled children can acquire and develop effective skills with the support from interacting with experienced teachers. Teachers can give more practical advice to students than online resources and friends can help each other in social skills such as how to love, share or behave, respect each other in school and work. Some information suggests that children in school are more socially intelligent and understanding, and perform very well when dealing with. That is why school is important.
Last but not least, training quality at school will be better and cannot be replaced. The evidence is that when teachers ask questions, students at school will answer faster and more accurately those learning online. Therefore, learning at school is truly more important and much faster to absorb than learning online.
In short, despite the development of technology, the benefit that schools bring to students is irreplaceable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, therefore, well, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40697674419 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76430510787 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608527131783 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9879275366 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.307692308 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232531843732 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861604980447 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131853056654 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125029399274 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118121083048 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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