Some people fervently believe that the rising cultural and trading exchange with other countries has great merits. Others think the opposite since this make people lose their cultural identities. In my perspective, it has both pros and cons but I gravitate more toward the pros.
On one hand, trading with other nations can be beneficial for the indigenous country's economy. In deed, the capacity of exporting products to overseas countries not only can bring more revenue to the local brand but also promote the cultural pattern of one country. For example, Vietnam has endorsed bun cha to manifold other potential markets such as Korea, America, Dubai and it has stimulated people's interest in Vietnamese as well as its local cuisine. On top of that, overseas trading also offer employment opportunities to the residents. To cite an example, the other advanced technical countries like Japan or Korea are captivated by the cheap labour force of Vietnam so Vietnamese are likely to work in an international environment. By and large, doing business with other countries could give a lot of opportunities to country economy.
On the other hand, over exposure to foreign cultures make local origin obscure and it is revealed clearly via teenagers. The digitalization has enabled people to easily gain access to other culture through movies, music, TV show.More and more people prefer the westerner lifestyle to their origin, regardless its bad impact. For instance, oriental teenagers are adversely affected by the drug culture showed in Hollywood movies and try to mimic those gestures like smoking or swearing which does not conform to the easterner's social norms. To sum up, people should be more aware of the foreign cultural products which does more harm than good.
In conclusion, cultural and trading exchange with other countries has advantages overwhelmed its drawbacks. It helps in the economic growth ; however, it should be considered cautiously when comes down to bad behaviour in other cultures.
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- Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities.Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and incl 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, by and large, to sum up, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28348909657 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72724566355 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601246105919 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3385608562 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.066666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19221055047 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688944555014 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452885605882 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118518947026 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416435604389 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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