Nowadays, some issues about environment emerge to the public whether people shall prevent from climate change or live together with it. I completely disagree if we must live-in with the damaging environment, this essay will explain the reason.
On the one hand, people have some ways to change the environment to save a life. The problem of climate change is caused by human activity, which doesn’t aware of the environment. Therefore, the most solution is that people must lead to the usefulness of eco-friendly activity. Then, the utilization of technology that has been built by the human can find a solution to this problem. For example, the development of technology transportation by using renewable energy resources such as solar, bio-fueling, and wind energy not only reduce the temperature of the world that will stabilize the climate change but also decrease the number of pollution in the world.
On the other hand, people cannot live to suffer from climate change in the long period. The one reason is that climate change is the one problem which brings the world to the devastation. Some issues will emerge after climate change. Firstly, the world will increase its temperature so that the temperature in the world will be hotter than before. Although people can suffer from this condition, the people just have the appropriate temperature in the range between 25-32 Celsius, after that the people must need an air conditioner. Secondly, the higher temperature will relate to the melting process of ice in the Antarctica and Arctic, so that the sea level will rise to a significant level. Then some small island will sink.
In conclusion, climate change will damage the world, for a short period, people might be live and find a short time solution, but for long-time period, the world will endanger to all species.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08250825083 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69729252115 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518151815182 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.542104617 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205101303195 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777857686891 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609722393543 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141816288296 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757322040615 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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