It is certainly true that our lives are heavily affected by climate change. I strongly disagree with the opinion that we should make plans to deal with this change instead of stopping making it happen.
Climate change can cause harm or even deathly effects on people's lives. In recent years, we are witnessing extreme weather conditions around the world which are negatively affecting human activities and their health. For example, hundreds of people in North India were reported dead from the unusual hotness in summer 2016, and the same trend is predicted to continue this year. The rising pollution in most cities in the world is also a big threat to the survival of mankind. Air pollution and water pollution are known as the top reasons causing serious illnesses such as cancers, lung disease, poisoning. Furthermore, scientists have warned that disastrous natural disasters will be more likely to occur often in the next decades if climate change still happens at a speedy rate.
On the other hand, people can definitely take action to protect the environment and improve our lives. Climate change is not a natural occurrence but it stems from the human impacts. Carbon dioxide released from the factories and vehicles contributes largely to the greenhouse effect which makes our world warmer. By cutting down the emissions from human daily activities and reduce the reliance on fossil fuels, we can prevent climate change and achieve sustainable development. Everybody can join hands to make our planet greener by taking such small actions as planting trees, recycling waste, turning off inactive electronic devices.
In conclusion, I believe climate change can be prevented if people its bad effects and soon take action to protect our planet.
- Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue 75
- Some people think that instead of preventing climate change we need to find a way to live with it To what extent do you agree or disagree 92
- more and more measures to improve the security in the urban area have been introduced because of the increased crime Do the benefits of the measures outweigh the drawbacks 73
- The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 702, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'occur'.
Suggestion: often occur
...atural disasters will be more likely to occur often in the next decades if climate change s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20422535211 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5179281779 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644366197183 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3423797248 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.571428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180905984148 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628420675554 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578575844228 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12794850542 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052373045573 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.