Some people think an International car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution.Others think there are more effective ways to do this.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Air pollution is the biggest challenge for the people in current generation and it would increase more and more if it has not been stopped. So, to gain control over it, some communities at global level as well as people think that international car-free day is an effective way to get the pollution to lower level. Well at certain extent it is a good idea, but a car-free day for limited time period could not make much difference in air pollution.
Firstly, I would like to add that the more the private vehicles are in use, the more nuisance they create. For an example, usage of a lot of cars cause traffic problems. With traffic it causes air pollution as well as noise pollution too, which affects one mentally sometimes. Because of noise people could not hear the bird's voices, therefore they miss the beautiful moments of the nature in life.
Secondly, only the cars are not the caution of the air pollution. Factories, mills and many other human activities are also responsible for it. There are also other ways to degrade pollution. Like, Planting trees instead of towering buildings, provide better services and facilities of public transport to encourage people etcetera.
Using more public transport reduce the traffic at reasonable level, which save time for people to travel from one place to another. Fast transportation help employees to get to office in reduced time that increase the productivity. However, because of trraffic all these daily routine get uneven and people would face stress, disease and other health regarding health.
To conclude, 'Health is wealth' and pollution is it's enemy. So, everyone should look over it and contribute individually to make better future for next generation.
- In many countries, there are few people to earn extremely high salaries. Some say it is good thing for a country, others say that government should allow sharing at a certain level. Discuss the both views and give your opinion. 60
- Some people think an International car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution.Others think there are more effective ways to do this.Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04195804196 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62847775347 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583916083916 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1465125404 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230545331679 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686600216052 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772674909527 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110599940488 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103932642524 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.