Today, the climate change is a major crisis that needs to be taken care of. To cut air pollution causing havoc to individuals' health, tactics such as international car free day has been proposed. Although many countries have already embraced the plan, there's been discrepancy among many other important countries over acceptability of this method. I will assert my opinion regarding the matter shortly.
On the one hand, tackling air pollution requires thoughtful actions in order to make this right. Car free day plan has been accepted by many people and scientists alike which they all found it quite efficient. It will bring many benefits to our lives ranging from cultivating the culture of happiness, improving physical fitness to enhancing mindfulness and creativity. Cycling and walking to work, that results in culture of happiness, is more fruitful than driving or taking any public transportation. They not only give you a pleasant experience but also rise up your spirit to a substantial degree. The higher happiness factor has a lot to do with exercise and relief of being stuck in traffic with aggressive drivers or being squashed by complete stranger on subway or on bus. This leads to higher productivity and energy level at work. Another advantage which is associated with biking and traveling to work on foot is physical fitness. Biking wards off the feeling of sluggishness and fatigue and strengthen your immune system. If you dedicate some of your time to it, your clarity and creativity will boost to a great deal.
On the other hand, opponents of this view belive in different methods which may best suited to their taste. They say Although commuting to work by biking is quit effective in increasing the flow of blood and helping cardiovascular system, it takes too much of their time to get to work leading to exhaustion at work which decreases their potential and doze off right amid their work.
Going to gym and practicing other ways of sport like aerobic, marshal arts and many others of that ilk they have found quite interesting as compared to before mentioned view.
To sum up, I believe people's preference in this case needs to be considered. They have to be given a choice to decide which way is the best way to go.
- Some people think international car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution, others think there are some other ways. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- Some people believe that the government should ban dangerous sporting activities, while others think that people should have the freedom to do whatever sports they choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 89
- It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents.Do you agree or disagree? 73
- Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
- Families who do not send their children to government-financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, so, then, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94210526316 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7325066876 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613157894737 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3071787647 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8421052632 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159022906975 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436010350541 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438938510872 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856913007164 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301305426774 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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