Some people think that international car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution, however others think that there are other ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some individuals believe that the invaluable method to lessen the air pollution is taking place international days without cars, while others hold the view that there are numerous approaches to tackle the problem. From my point of view, people could take into account a wide range of measures rather than car-free days worldwide.
On the one hand, it is believed that one of the most effective solutions to alleviate air deterioration is the car-free days. This is mainly because cars, which account for a significant consumption level aroung the world, is the chief culprit for noxious gas emission, especially carbon dioxide. As a result, the exhaust fumes would expand the carbon footprint and lead to serious environmental pollution such as greenhouse effect and ozone layer depletion. Therefore, it stands to reason that the reduction in cars in road haulage system would greatly contribute to the fresh atmosphere.
On the other hand, I believe that there are a host of alternative methods to reduce air pollution. Firstly, planting trees could possibly the practical way thanks to its process of absorbing carbon dioxide and emitting oxygen. These days, many countries, for example Germany, Filand, has lauched a series of environmental campaigns to prompt their citizens to fill the living space with the color of green. This measure has relieved the amount of fine dust, which is the consequence of air pollution, in atmosphere of almost big cities. Additionally, using renewable energies like solar, wind, water power as the main supply for daily living activities is thought to an approachable solution mainly because it could replace the fossil fuels consumption in manufactoring industry.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that a combination of different method is the most feasible way to ameliorate the air pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3264604811 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85943693571 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632302405498 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0070285303 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.166666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202677850536 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676306550017 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582823659479 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1177472566 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588326868692 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.