Some people think that introducing new technology can
improve people's quality of life in the developing countries.
However, others believe that free education should be
offered. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The standard and cost of living is booming in leaps and bounds in which technology and education play an insipensalbe role in each and every countries.A prominent sentiment is that providing free education and develop modern technology is fruiful for luxury lifestyle.In this essay i would eucidate how education and technology help to improve the way of people living in the subsequent writeup.
technology has myriad merits for people and their living standards.The first and predominant one is modern gadgets like computer,tv,fridge,air conditioning help to improve the entertainment, communication, preserve food for long time.One more convincing point is that scientists and doctor help to improve the health of human being.On other word due to the modern treatment facilities help to tackle the serious or dangerous help diseases like cancer and heart transplant.Finally, people can use new transplantation facilities like plane, bullet train which is helpful to reduce the time to reach somewhere and humans have extra time to spare with their family, friends and do some leisure activities.
education is similarly important to improve the way of living standards of people.education key factor for people this is because the future of any person is totally dependent of qualifications.So Governments should provide free education to help to sequre the future of any children.Furthermore,poor people can get higher study in free of cost which is definitely help to in future of them and their family.so education is directly related to job.For a paradigm someone who have high qualifications then they able to get high wage and improve the way of lifestyle.
In conclusion, free study and Invent a new technology both are equally important to the way of person live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, similarly, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40287769784 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47710576185 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543165467626 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 221.72279991 49.4020404114 449% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 375.5 106.682146367 352% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.5 20.7667163134 335% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.75 7.06120827912 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17317147197 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117967219393 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338674021678 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117967219393 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338674021678 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.8 13.0946893788 296% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.02 50.2224549098 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.22 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.09 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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