Restoration of old buildings in main cities involves enormous government expenditure. It would be more beneficial to spend this money to build new houses and roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience
sports play a vital role in human. this is fruitful for people's health as well as their personality.There two type of games first one is simple and another is dangerous. Both of require body command to perform any activities. But today scenario is extremely difficult sports are more famous among society. There are plethora of reasons behind this trend also this is trend has definitely profitable for individuals and Government.
The first and predominant one is take a risk and try a new things is natural behaviour of any people. they preferre learning something new when it is famous as well. For an example, a recent survey showed that dangerous sports are more famous among the younger generation.If they do not try society think that they are crower and afraid to doing it. another,convincing point is that tiny portion of people's choose carrier in this types of activities because sports organiser give large amount of money as a prize. this money help to improve financial support for their family. So all this reasonas enough for them to do dangerous sports and show their braveness and skills.
No one can deny the undeniable fact of trainer requirements to do any activities. If someone who want to learn and enjoy climbing, tracking under a proper guidance and safety equipment then it is good for their life and reduce the chance of any harm of their bodies. Moreover, athletic can have good knowledge and command on their ability then it helpful to represent their country in particular sport at international level and help to gain status in community. another reason should be consider is that people can feel stress from daily hectic day however sports is an activity who reduce stress and recharge their mind.
In conclusion, dangerous sports surge their popularity because of many and this trend is definitely advantageous for nation and independent when it perform under a certain criteria.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, in conclusion, in particular, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01253918495 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75996333812 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583072100313 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0095769426 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9375 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113568536185 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402983601571 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300371126509 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706483460687 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382625597423 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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