Some people think that people should choose their job based on income in order to provide security for their family.Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job?What other factors should be considered

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...y choose work according to pay scale. there are many other factor should consi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25095057034 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58084882086 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.120622688 49.4020404114 350% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 345.25 106.682146367 324% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.75 20.7667163134 317% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.5 7.06120827912 446% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337669179597 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194835550913 0.084324248473 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351682801176 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194835550913 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351682801176 0.056905535591 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.2 13.0946893788 276% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.96 50.2224549098 -6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.06 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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