Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Living in a horizontal city or in a vertical city is among the most of fiercely debated issues nowadays. While some people suppose that residing in horizontal city is a best option I would argue that dwelling in vertical city is much more convenience for younger people in morden life.
On one hand, there are some benefits for people living in horizontal city. Firstly, it allows people to reduce the financial issues. As resident do not have to pay for the building services, they are able to save a great amount of money which can be used for others purpose in life. In addition, people tend to stay in lower of the ground because they feel safer when emergency situation happened. For example, People are more likely to easily escape from house which is being fired if they live in a lower of the grown. Finally, private environment is considered as a reason for people to choose horizontal house for a living place. Since older people always prefer to do gardening and planting flower around the house as well as do not be disturbed by intrusive noises from crowd of people surrounding, they want to live in a peaceful place.
On the other hand, high – building is a place prefered by people to settle in due to several reasons. First of all, it provides convenience services utility for resident who live in. For example, skyscrapers provide shopping mall, restaurants, schools just to name a few in side the house which helps people to save a great amount of time instead of going out dinner or picking up their kid from school. Furthermore, more lands can be saved if more people live in vertical city. As a result, space land can be use for others public services such as building a park, hospital, or museum. In short, people live in verizontal houses are able to enjoy both services of high – bulding and public services.
In conclusion, although staying in a lower of ground is a good choise it seems to me that skyscrapers are prefered by many younger people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66285714286 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50407667614 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6481105852 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9375 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22631928192 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885047192148 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760401954556 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142188059829 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105728549096 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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