There has been a significant growth in the number of skyscrapers the world over, particularly in cities. Even though many argue for horizontal development, I believe that vertical expansion is the only possible option in cities for the scarcity of land.
Proponents of the traditional type of city may argue that it is a better place to live. The primary reason is that a conventional house with a courtyard and a garden can provide plenty of free space and a sense of freedom to the resident. They believe that with these types of constructions we can establish a harmonious and direct relationship with nature. Furthermore, according to them, a detached and single-storey building offers greater safety in an emergency situation such as natural calamity or fire.
However, I believe that vertical building is the only choice in many cities, especially in cosmopolitan cities where there is a big shortage of land. For example, in Mumbai, in India, the housing issues could be solved only by constructing multi-storey buildings as they could efficiently accommodate more people in the limited land area. Secondly, the price of land is enormously high in big cities, and it is far beyond the reach of middle-class and common people. If high rise buildings are constructed, many people could fancy having an apartment well within their financial reach.
To summarise, in urban setting vertical development is the best option owing to the scarcity of land. The area thus saved could be better used for entertainment facilities and such as parks and museums.
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- Some people think that human history has been a journey from ignorance to knowledge Others argue that this underestimates the achievements of ancient cultures and overvalues our accomplishments Discuss both the views and give your opinion 66
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 73
- Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion? 11
- Some people think that vertical city is the best where people live and work in tall buildings Others think that horizontal city is better where there are few tall buildings Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12156862745 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98027863561 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592156862745 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0221886289 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.833333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0787282435621 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298328103773 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346086209498 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0487041321951 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139824352907 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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