Some people think that it is best to live in a vertical city (meaning that people work and live in high buildings) while others think a horizontal city is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Change is an inevitable part of life and of all times, so we see many changes. Gone are the days when there were fewer tall buildings. While today, the buildings are built in a modern way. There is still much debate about whether vertical cities are best for individual cities or horizontal cities. I will discuss both views in the upcoming paragraphs.
The main reason why developed cities are important to people. The first and foremost reason is less space and more amenities. Take the example of the city of Newark, where there are many skyscrapers, which provide a lot of facilities to improve the lives of people. Besides, the second reason is the increase in employment. Cities with many tall buildings mean more jobs and the construction of tall buildings has partly solved the problem of employment for everyone.
However, another commentator chose horizontal cities to be better. Firstly, horizontal cities will have more parks and when it comes to entertainment, so there will be more amenities and better health for everyone. Furthermore, individuals will not have to pay extra for parking as most people already have enough parking space for everyone.
In summary, the argument is mentioned above in a nutshell. It can be concluded that, in my opinion, the vertical city is the best because the vertical city design is according to the available space. The use of space is better in vertical cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, so, still, while, in summary, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9746835443 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67145593537 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565400843882 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7373737163 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6875 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8125 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265392467845 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767023860959 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645262478044 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150954298495 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307361951874 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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