Undeniably, job satisfaction is one of the major element for successful professional life and contentment. However, inflation and outbursted population have originated unemployment globally and strained mental horizon. Henceforth, few favor it's exceptional to be blithe from earning responsibility unless acquired dream job than serving organisation unwilling. I go Contrary to the antecedent viewpoint due to proliferation of catastrophic impact psychologically related to funds paucity and invitation of chaos in life. Further, the justification favoring my consideration would be explicated in posterior crumbs prior ending up with final note.
Proceeding ahead, primarily, being idle may lead to rusting of skills and expertise ultimately, impacting efficiency and capability of brain and building up of lethargicness . To exemplify, 60 % academicians performance found to be less productive after long exam break, as per stats by national IQ testing department. Another striking reason could be price boom. To meet essential living standards especially bread earning, financial resources are must where job choices may hinder lifestyle and build up conflicts in interpersonal relations. For example, majority of students in UK face challenges to meet daily necessities as they emphasize on desired job only.
Turning to other fact, compromising with available jobs though excessively educated may build up lack of confidence, astoundment, leaving brains strained by repenting being in inevitable circumstances. For example, one third ratio in USA is still jobless and waiting for better opportunity as per their degrees.
To recapitulate, although struggling unless better option grabbed sounds fruitful in terms of making dream come true but i think continuing with existing scenario indulges brain into task and keep thinking or intellectual skills in process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun favor seems to be countable; consider using: 'few favors'.
Suggestion: few favors
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Suggestion: fund
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Suggestion: meeting
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, third, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94444444444 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32625920884 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.751851851852 0.561755894193 134% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7767242977 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.461538462 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129352383387 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424055185965 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0228753268025 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724717823489 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113951015878 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.17 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.12 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.