Some people think it is good thing for senior management positions to have very high salaries as compared to other workers of the same company or organization. To what extent you agree.
The money is very important source for the survival of life. It a big aspect of life. For instance, the topic asserts that should the senior management positions having high salaries as compare to other workers of same company or not? I completely agree with this description and define the important reason behind this in the given essay.
At the first, I given the possible reason for the high salaries of senior management. Openly speaking, there are three main reason of this. The first and foremost is responsibility. It define as the senior management having more responsibilities as compare to other workers of the company. Apart from that, the senior person of the company having power of decision making and they take best decision in any situation which is good or bad. Moving forward, the senior person has more skilled and leadership quality because they know about how to coordinate the workers and as well as, aware from the skills to tackle the problem. The second reason behind this the experience, the senior workers have been more experience because they work in company for long time period so they have so much material, knowledge, and other qualities.
The third and last reason in under this that is workload. On the head of senior person of the company have more workload. Therefore, the top management do not see to time for finished the work but also see to the work when the work finish that time the senior person of company feel free. The burden of work is more as compared to other workers of the company. A good example is here the survey conducted by the university of Columbia and result of that survey was the 50% more workload on the head of senior management as compared to other workers of company.
We have seen what there are number of answers of the question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that the I am totally agree because according to their work , skill, and knowledge they deserve for the high salary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tance, the topic asserts that should the senior management positions having high ...
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Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'gave'?
Suggestion: gave
...in the given essay. At the first, I given the possible reason for the high salari...
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Message: Did you mean 'defines'?
Suggestion: defines
...irst and foremost is responsibility. It define as the senior management having more re...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'take the best'.
Suggestion: take the best
...aving power of decision making and they take best decision in any situation which is good...
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...y feel free. The burden of work is more as compared to other workers of the compan...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'I'?
Suggestion: the; I
...alance, however, I tend to believe that the I am totally agree because according to t...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...I tend to believe that the I am totally agree because according to their work , skill...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ly agree because according to their work , skill, and knowledge they deserve for t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, well, apart from, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75659824047 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47606095986 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469208211144 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8069342403 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1111111111 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323764586938 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106032170976 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111283592003 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197610735041 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693610963561 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.