Nowadays people throwaway old things and adapt new things. Do this disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh any possible economic advantage.
With the rise in modernization. A man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking bare footed in the jungles to take first steps on the moon. One of the most controversial issues relates to is that the throwaway the things and adapt the new things for the growth of the economy? It is true that the people have a tendency to discard them old and damage possions these days when they own something new. In this essay, i am going to examine this question from both points of view.
On one side of this argument there are people who agree that the disadvantages outweigh from its advantages. The main reason for believing this is that the some resources are used and take longer to decompose such as: plastic, rubber. It is also possible to say that in the current time the use of machinary is increasig, and creating more pollution, and wastege of electercity gas etc. A good illustration of this is recent research state that canada and america contain only 5.2% Of the world population tiled, are accountable 31.5% of consumption.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that infact the advantage for the economy growth in both case: personal or national economy growth. People often have this opinion because the whole society are grow, and reduce the number of incidents such as: robberies, and death. A second point is that the new products will invent, and help the environment. A suitabe example here is the work with new technology or machinary are more faster and profitable as comapre to the hand made product.
As we have seen that there are numbers of answers to this question. On balance, however, i tend to believe that there the 3R methodology must be use such as: reduce those things which are not more usable, and reuse the some things which are in good condition, and in last step to recycle the product for again use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68545994065 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55194258502 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563798219585 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1975336799 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8823529412 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203233120428 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538311094219 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566533285997 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109575474269 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485945708892 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.