Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that develop the mind, such as reading and doing crossword puzzles. Others feel that it is important to give one's mind a rest in leisure time. Discuss.
Some individuals think use free time for activities that develop the mind, such as reading and doing crossword puzzles. While others feel that to give one's mind a rest in leisure time. In this essay discuss both the views.
The first and prominent point is that, if masses use their leisure time for activities instead of their daily routine work such as jobs due to this they feel fresh all the day. Secondly, not only youngsters but also children do reading and play crossword puzzles in their free time owing to this they develop their mind in generating the ideas. Moreover they do not feel tired as well as feel bore due to do these activities as doing their daily work.
On the other hand, some people feel it is important to give time for rest in free time. For example doctors. They all the day doing work in a hospital such as doing checkups, surgeries and operations so they feel tired. In this situation they cannot do any extra circulam activities in their free time as they want only for rest and set up their mind.
To conclude, doing activities in a free time is a best way due to this masses feel fresh and they enjoy their all the day. However, some individuals only spent their free time for rest after spending all the day in a work. If they do not take rest than they cannot give proper focus on their task such as doctors, teachers and builders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...as reading and doing crossword puzzles. While others feel that to give ones mind a re...
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Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...lop their mind in generating the ideas. Moreover they do not feel tired as well as feel ...
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ude, doing activities in a free time is a best way due to this masses feel fresh ...
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Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ies in a free time is a best way due to this masses feel fresh and they enjoy their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48207171315 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1660779717 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454183266932 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9766690524 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5384615385 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445940982097 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199582811917 0.084324248473 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154010959194 0.0667982634062 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.350415396727 0.151304729494 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179582788848 0.056905535591 316% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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