Some people think it is not necessary for adults to receive education in class. Self study is a good way for them to study more effectively. To what extend do You agree or disagree?
Being a human study is not only the intrinsic part of people life, but indispensable also. Although a large scale of people have their own school of thoughts regarding to education that students should not go to Institute in terms of getting knowledge, as they push their favour that self study is more prominent instead classes. In this essay, I largely disagree with the notion that student should not take education from coaching centres.
Commencing with the most salient reason why masses say that self study is a great way to learn anything. First and predominant fect is that developing cognizant skills. In other words, without having doubt, with the help of alone sitting education, students can enhance their skills. This might be because, students have to utilize their own intellectual power because at home there is no one available for giving help in order to solve any question. Due to this, children will not only convert into broad-minded, but also bring up with a computer whiz-kid. As a result, self study can prove as a boon for students.
However, on the other hand, despite having few plus factors of self study, the drawbacks of alone sitting education cannot be overlooked by students. First and foremost is that learners can easily grasp the root of any difficult question through the assistance of tutor. To explain it, students neither figure out all the mistakes in their education not improve their inner talent because it is quite hard for them, as they may not familiar with their own skills, but in education centres there are numerous teachers available, who have already passed many stages either obstacle or ease. In this way, they always accessible in terms of helping students. Consequently, taking education from experts, it can prove as a stepping stone for students.
In conclusion,even though self study is very effective in terms of concentrating on education without any disturbance, in order to improve skills, children have to join classes under the supervision of experts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... part of people life, but indispensable also. Although a large scale of people have ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mencing with the most salient reason why masses say that self study is a great wa...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , even
...ping stone for students. In conclusion,even though self study is very effective in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07207207207 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65822256937 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582582582583 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0436689184 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.6 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196712344215 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682316100711 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580969759687 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127580372146 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172981976045 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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