Do you feel artists like writers, musicians and painters still have value in modern society? Discuss.
Having a favoritee Profession, not only gives money, but also enjoyment, and a good few people Want to become an artist, either it gives satisfaction to them or built a bridge with their own culture. Indeed, the importance of artists cannot be over-looked by people, In this essay I will articulate the importance of artists for modem society.
Commencing with most salient reason is that artists preserve the culture. In other words, although majority of youngsters are influnced by westren contries. However, with the help of own culture painting and music, people can attach their traditions. This might be because, people can know about the beauty of their holistic ground of the country's culture through by artists. Ergo, art and craft, whether have its own intrinsic or indispensable values for a nation's.
In addition to this, despite having any doubt, vast majority of masses choose a ground in terms of obtaining luxurious life, regardless gaining money, it can put impact on a country's economy as well as on some extent this business can rise economy of a nation's. For example, monalisa is a painting, which is most expensive drawing in utter world and the avail not only grab by artists but also by country.
In conclusion, as people can show their skills front of immense world along with it also a method of receiving money by this profession. This things go hand in hand at the same time .
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Suggestion: a nation; nations
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Suggestion: a nation; nations
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
... of receiving money by this profession. This things go hand in hand at the same time...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... things go hand in hand at the same time .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9243697479 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6262622107 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613445378151 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5930072267 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.545454545 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0720175418045 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282297792071 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296391405925 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0432518075444 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029448683425 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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