Marriages are bigger and more expensive nowadays them in the
past. Is this a positive or negative development?
Wedding is on intrinsic occasion to celebrate the happiness of two Individuals together with these relatives and friends. Today, the weddings have been celebrated in a grand manner with spending extdvagant money on them. This factus has multifarious negative. effects on the society as well as this every will articulate the Positive along with the negative impacts on the community before drawing a logical conclusion.
To commence with a few constructive aspects of this phenomenon 4 and the first and foremost is, it is regarded in once in in lifetime events. Most of the people gravitate towards the sense of pride and glory along with tend towards making the event in a memorable occasion love whole life span. Moreover, several humans prefer to create the community spirit with having get together in order to strengthen the Social bonds as well as the persons avail the instant relief from all kind of worries and break from many monotonus rountine of the life.
On the other hand, several of the catastrophic facts of the prodigal and expensive benequets. One of them is that an awful and splurging Amount of money is spent on the preparation of food as well as on the decorations. Therefore, the aggravate financial burden is gaming the vast ground among the entire expenses which resulted in to lending the huge debts in terms of meeting the demands Although, from accomplishing there necessities the witer life span would be become sorrly.
Furthermore, as the exorbitant amount of funds invest the food which become a reason of leading and giving birth to the wastage of the food durring these lavish weddings. Though the huge quantity of unused beverages also spoils. due to just in showing the prestige and pride of a family. Apart from it, this phenomenan is also a cause of disastrous social evil,namely Dowry system, which is the most highly detrimental ills perpetrated against the women. Owing to this, the girls are treated as in burden and her family must pay to get her married, despite having the demand of dowry is a serious offence. Thus, this fact leads towards the female infanticide in the whole world along with the deleterious consequences.
To conclude, although the extravagant organised programes have some of the positive aspect as memorable moments, a lots of the negative factor have been affected the people. was well as the environment. Therefore, the individuals should spent enough financial assets on their occasions of marrages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, apart from, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06112469438 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72388098514 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564792176039 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4901744285 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.947368421 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5263157895 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112246541981 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324533077982 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344030300537 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612749905994 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317234598526 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.