Some people think that it’s best to encourage children to leave family home as soon as possible. Others believe children should stay at their family home for as long as they like. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the era of modern world, some appreciate their juvenile to live a self-reliant life at the earliest and believe in “kick him out of the nest and hope he learns to fly”, whereas some gainsay with this statement. I opine to unpack both favoured and refused views of such wind, in subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, we need to understand that many families in today’s economy do share a household for financial or other reasons. A family has no arbitrary age for children to leave the parental home. Once after leaving home, adolescent prudent about their manner of living and examine how to manipulate their living expenses, food bills and other charges, also they considerably must do their work solely. Therefore, start earning money at early age will be more benefited to carry off their outlay effectively and self-disciplined. For example, in developed countries people are more independent as compared to the citizens of developing countries and given isolated space for teenagers to think, what they really want and how they are going to achieve it.
In other hand, even though youngsters are personally benefited like being independent, taking care of financial and fitness expenses, but they scarce in kinship bonding and deficiency in seeking family ethics such as greeting someone and other social etiquettes, also family ties get loosened. Moreover, leaving home at young age, permit children to indulge in anti-social activities and get into mindset that they can do whatever they want and involve in rebellious activity.
To conclude, instead of picturing of adult child as a little bird whose wings may not hold him up when he leaves the nest, think of him as fully capable of flying. Identify ahead of time what your limits and boundaries are, what you’re willing to follow through with and which emotional buttons will most likely get you to give in. Every independent juvenile should always be monitored by family members up to the last year of teenage.
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- Nowadays in many countries’ women have full time jobs. Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 89
- These days it is very common to have people from two different generations mix in the same workplace. Are there more advantages or disadvantages to this situation? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples. 89
- Some people think that it’s best to encourage children to leave family home as soon as possible. Others believe children should stay at their family home for as long as they like. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, whereas, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10670731707 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73253573839 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655487804878 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2447565842 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.583333333 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333717554719 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105468283582 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642549662188 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167671600563 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607652426956 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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